Trailer in the making - feedback

As we are in the process of making our trailer, we have started of with the shots that we are going to use in our final product. We did not get all of our scenes filmed as we are struggling to find a church that would allow us to film inside so we are still on the hunt for that location. We asked our teacher to look at what we have so far and to give us constructive feedback so that we know what we need to do as a group in order to improve our trailer. Overall, our teacher said we had good work so far.
Here is the feedback we received from our teacher:

·         Likes how we filtered the colour out on the scenes of the young girl playing with the ball

·         Needed to include music in most of the scenes for the background

·         In the possession scene, the crackling music is too long and the actress looks like she is dancing – cut down the scene

·         Likes the shots in the beginning as it flows well together

·         Cut a bit of the back shot of the actress in the beginning if possible

·         Likes the slogan of our trailer

·         Loves the ball scene when the girl drops the ball and the scene of the ball rolling underneath the bed

·         Good actresses playing their parts well

·         Not quite sure about the Latin dictionary – make it look more realistic if so